Meet the Shuasu

By way of critique I'll just explain my stars <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Vision - By all means this is a decent drawing of an interesting character. Because it's a reference sheet I realise that she won't be in an interesting pose or have much going on in the background (which is what I'd give higher 'vision' for) but as far as successfully depicting character and design I'd say your task has been achieved.

Originality - The image itself isn't particularly original, but I adore strong women characters and her design is reasonably unique as far as I'm aware - I really like her half chaps. The colour scheme (red and gold) is fairly common but you've handled it well.

Technique - Her figure seems to be slightly awkwardly done, especially in the torso area. In the full body her chest just seems to thick, I'm not good at explaining, but even muscular women don't have such angled ribcages like that (and it makes her breasts look uncomfortable). I'd suggest looking at and sketching some topless women to get the curves more natural looking.
Her stance, as well, seems kind of off but I can't put my finger on it... (I also know nothing about how someone with goat feet would stand) Perhaps her legs bend forward too much.
As for the side view of her face; her forehead curves forward too much, I'm not actually sure how it attaches to the top of her head :/ Foreheads are pretty flat. This makes her nose look squished up and kind of crowded, as well as the eye being too low (eyes sit in the dip of the nose bridge, yours is lower than this). The mouth is pretty nicely done, though her lower jaw may be too far back (her chin seems a bit sunken).
Generally your proportions are pretty good, you've got a good basic understanding for big improvement <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> (I could try doing some redlining if it might help.)

Your colour pallet is well done, nice range of red and gold without looking boring. Your shading is a good mix of hard and soft - though sometimes leans towards looking murky. Something as simple as saving as a .png file instead of .jeg might help with clarity. The light source seems consistent, I always find that the hardest XD

Impact - As said before this is a decent drawing of an interesting looking character. It's a character sheet so there isn't really much room for impact <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Overall, nice work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> A few things to work on but nothing that detracts too much from a generally good picture ^-^